Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun

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Assignment: Provide Feedback and recommendations to revise the research Proposal on Tutankhamun
Title of Research proposal: Tutankhamun and Ankhkeperure: a Translation of the Inscriptions from the Tomb of Tutankhamun Pertaining to Ankhkeperure Smenkhkere and Ankhkheperure Neferneferuaten
Tasks to be done
1) Give a 2-3 sentence summary of what you think the proposed research is about:
2) What do you like most about this piece of writing?
3)What do you think is the biggest weakness of this piece of writing?
Recommendations for the revision process:
1. Macro revision: The big picture:
1.1 Structure/paragraphing:
1.2 Argumentation:
1.3 Citing other sources:
2. Micro revision: The little things
2.1 Cohesion:
2.2 Readability:
2.3 Formality:

A document titled ” Feedback Template for Research Proposal” is attached. Please use this to write the assignment.