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1. Citation needed
2. What specific emotions? Bring stronger more specific words into your thesis (possibly related to this point
   about failure to protect his sibling, guilt, etc.)
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3. So does Craig identify with Ben (as a victim of bullying) in this scene? Or with Raina (as someone whose
   younger sibling was being victimized)?
4. Good--elaborate on the significance of this. Does it relate to any of the larger themes of the book, for example?
5. Vague
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6. Where is the end of this quotation? A citation is needed here… you also might consider expanding on this point/
   linking it to a larger theme in the novel.