Comment Summary
Page 1

  1. Citation needed
  2. What specific emotions? Bring stronger more specific words into your thesis (possibly related to this point
    about failure to protect his sibling, guilt, etc.)
    Page 2
  3. So does Craig identify with Ben (as a victim of bullying) in this scene? Or with Raina (as someone whose
    younger sibling was being victimized)?
  4. Good–elaborate on the significance of this. Does it relate to any of the larger themes of the book, for example?
  5. Vague
    Page 3
  6. Where is the end of this quotation? A citation is needed here… you also might consider expanding on this point/
    linking it to a larger theme in the novel.