- Citation needed
- What specific emotions? Bring stronger more specific words into your thesis (possibly related to this point
about failure to protect his sibling, guilt, etc.)
- So does Craig identify with Ben (as a victim of bullying) in this scene? Or with Raina (as someone whose
younger sibling was being victimized)?
- Good–elaborate on the significance of this. Does it relate to any of the larger themes of the book, for example?
- Where is the end of this quotation? A citation is needed here… you also might consider expanding on this point/
linking it to a larger theme in the novel.