Do ones Racial and Ethnic appearance hinder their progress in the workforce?
Thesis: clearly stated and appropriately focused.
Supporting Research: thorough and relevant.
Focus & Content: sharp, distinct focus; balanced, substantial, specific, and/or illustrative content; sophisticated, mature ideas are particularly well-developed.
Organization: obviously controlled and/or subtle organization; strong topic sentences.
Style: writer’s voice is strong; precision in tone, sentence structure, and word choice.
Mechanics & Usage: free of mechanical and usage errors.
add some examples of black African Americans too because that’s what I have to talk about in my Ted talk for like 2 mins)