1. The first chapter is “very rough” and the writing must be improved. . The Learner needs to go through the dissertation “paragraph by paragraph” and highlight with the MEAL plan. The main ideas are stated in the paragraphs, but “not much analysis.” (The MEAL plan is attached). Please go through this chapter and input analysis where need be. Please don’t remove any information. I am requesting some revision to the attached document; if you add any reference please let them be within the last 5 years. The Main concern is the first 2 pages and and the assumptions. Under assumption.. please add some method, research, and theory assumptions.
