Don’t mind what angle you take, whether you argue that marginalisation is the most dangerous form of oppression or not, whichever side is stronger. My lecturers love sign posting, so if you’re moving onto a completely different point in a new paragraph, please put a subtitle. Also, when you do that the first sentence of the new paragraph should outline what you’re about to discuss e.g ‘Now I will discuss why marginalisation is the most dangerous form of opression’ Also please primarily refer to the file i have uploaded by Iris Marion Young and you may also include any other feminist/socialist philosophers who you feel will make your points stronger