response to two prompts
response to two prompts
*** Write a response to two of the following prompts. Each response should be at least three paragraphs long. Keep your introductory paragraph briefâno more than three sentences. ***
You should include at least two specific citations in each essay, and one of the textual references you cite should be a direct quotation, like this: We see Willieâs courage when he says to his bullies, âI am not going to run, and I am not going to fight back. You are the ones who are afraid, not Iâ (99). The â99â refers to the page number.
Also, strive to use the following âPIEâ structure in your paragraphs. Now here is a paragraph that makes a claim or âpoint,â supports the claim with textual evidence or an âillustration,â and then adds âexplanationâ to tie the evidence to the claim and make the point convincing:
Willieâs courage is deserving of our admiration, but sometimes we must question his judgment. For example, when he describes riding freight trains as his main mode of traveling from city to city, job to job, he does so even though he has been warned that it is a federal crime and that the rail yard guards carry cudgels and are accompanied by fierce dogs. He says that he felt âinvisibleâ (76). He would hide on the tops of tanker cars and underneath the flat cars. Heâd heard stories of hitchers being caught and beaten or robbed of all their belongings at knife point on a moving train, but that ânever scared me; my newfound freedom seemed to dissolve all fearâ (83-84). Willieâs actions were bold, and he certainly rejoiced in his freedom, but he seems oddly unconcerned for his safety and without fear. Here the two-page range is cited because the quotation spans both pages. ? Notice how the quotation does not start the paragraph; instead, it follows statements made by the student writer.
1) Select a passage from both âPigeonsâ and âSign Here if You Existâ that you find particularly engaging, one that holds your attention. Perhaps you find it engaging because you can identify or ârelateâ to the narrator, the situation, or to one of the minor characters. Perhaps you love the writing style or how the passage is writtenâthe diction, the sensory details, the intimate spoken quality, etc. Or perhaps your interest is engaged because of the subject matter. Write an essay of 3 paragraphs that explains how and why these two passages engage you. (Note: By passage we mean a paragraph or a few paragraphs.)
2) Write an essay of three paragraphs that characterizes the personal paradigm shifts that Quinn (âSign Here if You Existâ) and Pollack (âPigeonsâ) describe in their respective essays. What events change them, and how and why do they transform? Finally, in your conclusion, assess how the two transformations are alike or different.
3) We are taught that an âessayâ makes a point. It has a main idea or argument. Do these two narrative essays by Quinn and Pollack have that main idea, and is it stated explicitly for the reader? If so, what is it, and where in each essay is it openly stated?
4) Both essays use their closing paragraphs to âsynthesizeâ or tie together the experiences and ideas that are presented up to that point. What does the conclusion accomplish in each essay? Do you find both convincingâthat is, are you persuaded by what the author says in her closing reflection? Explain why or why not. I am/not persuaded becauseâ¦
5)   What do the two essay titles mean? Write an essay that interprets the two titles metaphorically. Close your essay with an insight about how titles work and what makes a good title