Sometimes a significant relationship with someone can help us to mature, easily or painfully. Recount the story of such a relationship in your own life or in the life of someone you know well. If this relationship marked a turning point in your life or

Sometimes a significant relationship with someone can help us to mature, easily or painfully. Recount the story of such a relationship in your own life or in the life of someone you know well. If this relationship marked a turning point in your life or
This is a Narrative essay and it is based on personal experience. I need to fix the grammar and many more for this essay. It is all included at the end of the essay where my Prof. explained what she wants to be fixed. Also i would like some more details in my essay. Such as examples and quotes.