1. “In America, it is an issue when one belongs to Asian community. There are different groups of Asian families in America depending on how they can identify themselves. It is normal in every society that there are ways in which people are identified basing on how other people identify them. In many cases, identification of Asians in the eyes of others outweighs their self-2.identification. Therefore, in the eyes of the others, Asians are identified as one ethnic group irrespective of their origins. This is created not only because of the way the white men identify Asians but also the way other Asians identify other Asians.” How is this related to the topic, moreover these sentences are very confusing rewrite!
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